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The Dance Studio is on the Move!

STORY:

After 23 years in the same location I am moving my dance studio to the next town. From Stoughton, MA to N.Easton, MA. We have had many wonderful memories at this location on Tosca Drive. Thousands of Dancers have danced at The Dance Studio in Stoughton.

I am going to tell you the facts, but of course I would want it reworded so that it sounds beautiful and fluid. The truth is that I am in an industrial location with nothing for the parents to do but wait for their child's class or come back to pick them up. It is an old building and altough we kept it nice, it is not new and the outside environment is dirty with an auto body business and a moving company with large trucks. Hardly conducive for little girls. I do not think it would be wise though to put down my current location too much as I am there until June.

In my new location, the building is brand new as will be the dance facility. There are over 550 parking spaces and it is conveniently located on the Stoughton Easton line off of Rte. 138. Easton Village boasts a beautiful supermarket, a nail salon, Dunkin Donuts, CVS, a Karate school and much more!!! It is less than 4 miles and 5 minutes from our current location.

I want to inform our customers and families that we are moving and will open our new studio on June 15, 2009. Also that it is new, beautiful, and that their children deserve the best. Also that it is close, convenient, plenty of parking and lots to do!

POEM:

 THE DANCE STUDIO IS ON THE MOVE!

After more than 20 years and a million steps in our location
We felt our dancers deserved a place as beautiful as their vocation
So we put our best foot forward and took a step in a new direction
By opening up our brand new studios at a nearby intersection
 
From Tosca Drive in Stoughton to N. Easton on Roche Bros. Way
You’ll see that our new facilities are just a hop, skip and jump away
Our exciting new environment will give your child a brand new spark
And you’ll be thrilled with so much to do and plenty of room to park
 
When you waltz into the studio it may not be easy to decide
Whether to stay and watch, or try to get some errands done outside
While your star is busy perfecting her latest tap, ballet or jazz
Take a little time out for you and see just what the village has
 
In Easton Village, you’ll discover just how much convenience prevails
Grab a coffee, go grocery shopping or sit it out and do your nails
Dancers always need to move, now we do too so they can shine
We know you'll join us in our new home on June 15, 2009!

TESTIMONIAL

Thank you so much, I absolutely love my poem!!!


 


 
 
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Thank You Ron & Shirley

STORY:

Our bosses Ron & Shirley (owners of the business) are very good to us and we want to let them know we appreciate them. We are like a large family working here at Avalon Pharmacy. We love each other and argue with each other, almost as if we were one large family. He loves to play Bridge. They both like hockey and are season ticket holders to the Penquins. There are several departments at the pharmacy- retail pharmacy, retail store, billing, compounding, bubbling, pain, and the drivers. We want them to know we are very happy they chose us to be part of this family. We want to have a poem made letting our bosses know how much they are appreciated.  Can it be left "unsigned" so we could have every employee (approx. 30) sign individually.  We want to say THANK YOU (serious

POEM:

We know in any business, employees sometimes disagree
But it's OK as long as they can do it respectfully
We also know in families, there is  often lunacy
And we love the fact that it’s no different at our pharmacy

We feel like a big family and we’re glad to be so close
We never go too www.omnical.co.uk far, dispensing just the perfect dose
If we are in need of  treatment, we know where to find a cure
We just go to our bosses, who will heal the wound for sure

You offer the right medicine, like your own holistic drug
By having you in charge, every smile feels like a hug
So play Bridge, watch your Penguins game, just give yourselves a break
You both know you deserve it for all the sacrifices you make

This comes from all departments, from the drivers to retail
We’d like to end this cartier replica watches   message with one last heartfelt detail
It’s just a simple fact, thanks to you, Shirley and Ron
That every one of us adores working at Avalon

TESTIMONIAL

Everyone liked the poem. It came out better than I thought it would. 

My boss said that in the 30 years he has been in business it was one of - if not the best - gift he ever got.  We always run out of ideas because they can buy whatever they want, and they are by no means extravagant people.  

This really hit the mark. Thanks so much.